写作题目:I want to be a|an…
教学过程。
1、Leading in导入:
播放一首英语歌:“Be what you want to be.”
任务:听歌,然后写出歌曲中表示职业类的英语单词(目的是活跃气氛,为引出今天的话题作文做准备。)
歌曲中表职业的单词:doctor,firefighter,teacher……
2、Brainstorm:让学生想出一些和职业类有关的单词短语和句子,目的是激活学生头脑中和写作话题I want to be a|an… 相关的东西,如梦想、喜欢的原因、怎样实现梦想等酝酿写作的思路,
3、Interview
教师提供参考句型。根据下列所给提示(5人一小组活动进行理想职业的采访)。
What do you want to be when you grow up?
Why do you want to be ……
How do you to do that?
4、Pre-writing(写作前准备)
(1)Make an outline at first(写出作文结构框架)
(2)Look up the words that they can’t write in the dictionary.
(3)Discuss your dream job in group.(小组讨论自己理想的作业)
(4)教师给学生提供一些有关梦想职业的精彩句子,为学生写作提供素材。
参考词汇: study hard for my dream, be good with kids
help them in study and life,a good job, helps others,
punish the bad people and protect the good people
live a safe life,
精彩句子:
I want to be a teacher in the future.
When I grow up, I want to be a policeman.
I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.
5 、while--writing:Write out your dream
学生自主写作
6、 Post-writing
学生互相批改 :优等生互改
一帮一互改
7、Share the writing.
点评两篇学生习作,选自一位基础较好的同学和一位基础一般的同学的作文。详细点评两篇习作的篇章结构和句法功能,指导学生多模仿好文章的优点。