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篇一：Environmental Pollution英语作文

Environmental Pollution

With the continuous development of world economy and the growing world population, environmental pollution attracts our attentions. Environmental pollution is one of the most serious problems that mankind faces today. Air, water and soil are necessary to the survival of all living things, but they all harmed by pollution. Polluted air can cause illness, and even death. Polluted water kills fish and other marine life. Pollution of soil reduces the amount of land on which we can grow food. Environmental pollution also brings ugliness to man’s naturally beautiful world. There are a lot of reasons causing the problem. For example, exhaust from automobiles causes air pollution. Factories discharge much of the material that pollutes air and water. Too much fertilizer or pesticide can ruin soil. So we should be responsible for the environment around us. We can take effective measures to protect our environment. Firstly, it’s best for us to ride a bike to school, don’t take a bus or a taxi. Secondly, scientists and engineers should work to find ways to lessen the amount of pollution that such things as automobiles and factories cause. Thirdly, government should pass and enforce laws that require businesses and individuals to stop or cut down on certain polluting activities. And lastly, we had better not cut down the trees.

I think solving the problem depends largely on our responsibility to society and environment. If the sense of responsibility is greatly aroused ,harmony between man and the environment will not be far away.

篇二：初中英语作文 Water Pollution(水污染)

初中英语作文 Water Pollution(水污染)

Water Pollution

With the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.

We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.

篇三：英语作文the fight against air pollution

The Fight Against Air Pollution

Recently, the air pollution has become a matter of a public concern. It, is obvious that the air pollution brings too much troubles to us all. Additionally, it also makes the environment around us worse and worse. So it is high time to fight against air pollution.

The following ways can be adopted to solve the problem. First of all, the government should make some plans to reduce the factory which is bad for air.Secondly, the teacher should also teach their students to fight against air pollution. Thirdly, we should plant more trees to get more fresh air. In fact, more than three ways can be adopted.

It is undeniable that fighting against air pollution is necessary. As for me, we should do our best to deal with this problem. When everyone is fully aware of the severity and take feasible measures, I firmly believe the environment we are living in will be more beautiful.

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Recently, the air pollution has become a matter of a public concern.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

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It, is obvious that the air pollution brings too much troubles to us all.

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Additionally, it also makes the environment around us worse and worse.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇: surroundings, environment 均含“环境”之意。

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less impressive等。

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So it is high time to fight against air pollution.

? [学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

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The following ways can be adopted to solve the problem.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇: problem, question, issue, matter 均含“问题”之意。

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First of all, the government should make some plans to reduce the factory which is bad for air.

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[搭配统计] 动名搭配 reduce...factory 在教材中出现过 4 次[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...plan 在教材中出现过 3156 次[学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

bad在写作中使用的太泛，在某些语境下可考虑换为unfavorable/dreadful/be

less impressive等。

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Secondly, the teacher should also teach their students to fight against air pollution.

? [学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

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Thirdly, we should plant more trees to get more fresh air.

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[搭配统计] 动名搭配 plant...tree 在教材中出现过 806 次[学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

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In fact, more than three ways can be adopted.

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[搭配统计] 动名搭配 adopt...way 在教材中出现过 95 次[批改提示] in fact的同义表达有in reality。

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It is undeniable that fighting against air pollution is necessary.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇: atmosphere, air, gas 均与“空气”有关。

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As for me, we should do our best to deal with this problem.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇: problem, question, issue, matter 均含“问题”之意。[批改提示] 注意deal with和deal in区别。

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When everyone is fully aware of the severity and take feasible measures, I firmly believe the environment we are living in will be more beautiful.

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[搭配统计] 动名搭配 take...measure 在教材中出现过 4091 次[学习提示] 易混词汇: aware, conscious, sensible 均含“意识到的”之意。


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